1) The pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dp5SdnFpKfA
2) A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch:
All the people that commented liked my idea and backed me to keep it up. On the other hand, there was a suggestion on a change, and that was the fact that I was seating down. I guess I forgot the professor recommended standing up. I guess people were very supportive of my idea because its something simple that helps animals and because this is a problem faced in a developing country and they don't know what the situation really is.
3) What did you change, based on the feedback?
I was a little fidgety the first time so now I tried to be more calmed. Also, this time I was standing and I didn't use the web cam.
Excellent post Nick, you did a fantastic on your elevator pitch, and made some really good changes after watching your first one. You were very concise and to the point, you did a solid job stating the need for your product and why those needs had to be met, as well as how you intended on meeting those needs. I think the only constructive feed back I have for you at this point is to filter out some of the "uhs".
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