1) The pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k35cf_dv0OU
2) The person that commented liked my idea and backed me to keep it up. Furthermore he suggested that I filtered out some of the word fillers such as the "um's"
3) I was a little fidgety the first and second times so now I tried to be more calmed. Also, I filtered out the word fillers.
Hi Nicolas,
ReplyDeleteOnce again you are doing great things with your presentation. I think you will be rapidly bringing your product to market and realizing fast sales. I still see the product as very important in your city, and hopefully for the rest of your country. I feel that many animals, as well as their owners, will benefit from your efforts.